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BROKEN GLASS -http://www.brokenglasspoetry.webs.com - Published in Online Ezine's First Edition - Crossroad, Schooled, Lost and Crushed

TURBULENCE http://turbulencepoetry.blogspot.com/ - Published in Issue number 7 - Seamstress

Saturday, January 8, 2011

Abyssal



















she walks like lava,
Poiseidon's water, cools
her crimson heat

glides smoothly by to
kiss your mouth, taste
fire, molten sweet

good-bye whispers,
abyssal plains chain
nixie, ocean jewel

sun sets fire on
fever waves, pillowed
ashes, breathless, cruel

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4 comments:

  1. jbcrenJanuary 9, 2011 at 7:03 AM

    I like the fluidity of this piece Jebbi and it has good rhythm...the 1st and 4th are my favs in this one. Good job.

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  2. JebbiJanuary 9, 2011 at 11:50 AM

    Thanks for reading and your very kind and generous comments throughout! Take care :)

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 6:10 PM

    I find this piece very mysterious, seductive.

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  4. JebbiJanuary 19, 2011 at 8:57 PM

    Irene :) Thanks for reading!

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