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BROKEN GLASS -http://www.brokenglasspoetry.webs.com - Published in Online Ezine's First Edition - Crossroad, Schooled, Lost and Crushed

TURBULENCE http://turbulencepoetry.blogspot.com/ - Published in Issue number 7 - Seamstress

Thursday, March 8, 2012

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just a little chance of touch
bent, static ache
only the sun came

free-bird surround sound
unchanged

she flew quietly,
beautifully away

and they slept

and had

no shame
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12 comments:

  1. Brian MillerMarch 20, 2012 at 9:02 PM

    ha...love the end of this...they slept and had no shame...also the free-bird surround sound...double meaning ...the song...and the bird song...i like...

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  2. UnknownMarch 20, 2012 at 9:10 PM

    Lovely poem to the passion where we seem to find a peace never known before. Excellent images of the bird, and knowing no shame, perhaps a reference to Eden?

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  3. emmaMarch 20, 2012 at 9:38 PM

    Jebbi, I love your way. free-bird surround sound...just perfect. Really enjoy the sharp simplicity of this poem.

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  4. JebbiMarch 21, 2012 at 5:53 AM

    Thank you Brian! :) Charles, perhaps :) Emma thanks so much! :)

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  5. Ginny BrannanMarch 21, 2012 at 8:59 AM

    In it's simplicity this says so much. Just lovely, Jebbi!

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  6. AnonymousMarch 21, 2012 at 9:29 AM

    only the sun came...sweet poem.
    gardenlilie.

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  7. Arron ShillingMarch 21, 2012 at 10:00 AM

    too rude for me... lol; you know i love it and why... because it's just so
    is all...as ever jebbi, you poke me in th ear with a feather :)

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  8. ClaudiaMarch 21, 2012 at 10:58 AM

    nice...yes...and why should they...smiles...beautifully penned jebbi..

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  9. Beth WinterMarch 21, 2012 at 1:55 PM

    Oh, gorgeous work. I love the understated sensuality.

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  10. JebbiMarch 21, 2012 at 4:38 PM

    Thanks all very much for you awesome replies :)

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  11. SemaphoreMarch 22, 2012 at 5:59 AM

    This is simple and understated, like a haiku. Very much reflective of the picture itself.

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  12. JebbiMarch 24, 2012 at 9:26 PM

    Thank you Semaphore :)

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