Publication Credits

BROKEN GLASS -http://www.brokenglasspoetry.webs.com - Published in Online Ezine's First Edition - Crossroad, Schooled, Lost and Crushed

TURBULENCE http://turbulencepoetry.blogspot.com/ - Published in Issue number 7 - Seamstress

Sunday, February 19, 2012

When I loved




















Love is overrated
stagnated

sit you ate

crave the chase
flooding faster

give me face
bait the master

to pull sate

x-tra, x-tra rated
manipulated

the very way I hated

when I loved




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6 comments:

  1. Brian MillerFebruary 22, 2012 at 4:21 AM

    the very way i hated when i loved...nice, yes i have seen that...nice cadence brought on by your rhymes...quick with pop i like

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  2. SheilaFebruary 22, 2012 at 7:01 PM

    loving the flow and intensity of this, jebbi. nicely done.

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  3. ClaudiaFebruary 25, 2012 at 10:28 AM

    wow..intense emotions here..left me kinda breathless-- nice jebbi

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  4. JebbiFebruary 25, 2012 at 10:54 AM

    Thanks Brian, Sheila and Claudia for the comments and reads! :)

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  5. christi moonFebruary 25, 2012 at 9:53 PM

    adore this. clever word-play makes this a real powerhouse of a piece for me. great work Jebbi!

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  6. JebbiFebruary 27, 2012 at 4:39 PM

    Thanks Christi :)

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