Publication Credits

BROKEN GLASS -http://www.brokenglasspoetry.webs.com - Published in Online Ezine's First Edition - Crossroad, Schooled, Lost and Crushed

TURBULENCE http://turbulencepoetry.blogspot.com/ - Published in Issue number 7 - Seamstress

Monday, July 11, 2011

Silver Tongue














soft hands careless,
caress, less and more

and oh...

go, yeah,

like that

opposite idle
silver tongue flash
rushed quick
into the vein
feel slippery,
blue-hot,
rain
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6 comments:

  1. Brian MillerJuly 19, 2011 at 9:06 PM

    whew...that is hot...smiles...very sensual...nice...

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  2. ReflectionsJuly 19, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    Nice piece... dazzling.

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  3. AnonymousJuly 20, 2011 at 6:55 AM

    Love this one, Jebbs... my all-time fave of yours

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  4. UnknownJuly 20, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    Intense and quick pace, wonderful write ~ Rose

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  5. Chronicles of IllusionsJuly 20, 2011 at 4:31 PM

    powerfully sexual. love it

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  6. Joseph HeschJuly 21, 2011 at 7:21 PM

    I especially like how you changed the tempo of the poem--using space and language-- to express the languorousness of the beginning to the rush at it's end. Well done!

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