Publication Credits

BROKEN GLASS -http://www.brokenglasspoetry.webs.com - Published in Online Ezine's First Edition - Crossroad, Schooled, Lost and Crushed

TURBULENCE http://turbulencepoetry.blogspot.com/ - Published in Issue number 7 - Seamstress

Sunday, December 25, 2011

Christmas Eve
















Patience waits for Christmas eve, 
a Christmas Tree; 


Blessed in deep-side willowy,
pondered thoughts on living,
perhaps today, should be


for me,


Thanksgiving.








xo

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11 comments:

  1. Ginny BrannanDecember 26, 2011 at 5:45 AM

    This is lovely, Jebbi.

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  2. JebbiDecember 26, 2011 at 7:53 AM

    Thanks Ginny :)

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  3. Brian MillerDecember 27, 2011 at 5:56 PM

    nice...gentle...i hope you had a great holiday!

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  4. VictoriaDecember 27, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    Love the feeling of gentle anticipation and well-being that you create in few words. And the photo is special.

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  5. phillip woodruff (jalopy dreams)December 27, 2011 at 7:33 PM

    great economy. i think in another comment someone said soft and gentle, and i agree, and yet these few short breaths carry a lot of weight. there is a transition of emotion here that i can't quite explain, but can certainly feel... very well written

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  6. JebbiDecember 27, 2011 at 9:09 PM

    Brian thanks :) hope you did too...

    Thanks Victoria and Wood :)

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  7. AnonymousDecember 27, 2011 at 11:46 PM

    'blessed in deep-side willowy'... feel that. Lovely piece Jebbi.. :)

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  8. John (@bookdreamer)December 28, 2011 at 3:21 AM

    Enjoy the silence when you can

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  9. JebbiDecember 28, 2011 at 9:16 AM

    Becky, I was excited literally when that came to me...:) glad you like it.

    John - thanks for reading :)

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  10. SheilaDecember 28, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    nice twist on the holiday celebrations. happy (almost) new year!

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  11. JebbiDecember 28, 2011 at 5:12 PM

    You too Sheila! thank you. :)

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