Jebbi-- this is beautiful, absolutely adore it. xC.
Thanks very much Christi! :)
such a strong write! your descriptions are feather-light and the poem has a wicked cadence! loved the "at a weird angle" bit - nicely done!
Thank you so much!
Jebbi, I adore this poem. It is so spiritual - my fav includes "Sustained incandescence"
Sheila, Thank you so much!! :)
Very artful. Such careful word placement and rhythm. You infused it with an extra dimension. I enjoyed reading it.
Thank you very much Steve!
I liked this very much. Thanks.
what a beautiful picture and the poem is lovely and pleasant to rread
Remember this one from the board. Turned out lovely, Jebbi. One of my favorites by you!
Wonderful write, you captured the picture and brought it forth in a whole new light.
Budah, Quotes, Ginny and Pat..thanks so much for reading and your comments!!
this is very beautifull..esp that last stanza which to me carries a lot of emotion....well done...
This is so beautiful. You have a new follower.
That is a very intensely felt, sustained moment. I really began to see the being you had called up with words.
nice..shining but not in the plastic sense..and then staying..what a great closure jebbi
Fantastic! short but deep and meaningful. Love it :)
I love what you have done here Jebbi.. conjured a strong spiritual sense.. firmly rooted in the everyday (and weird is just right there :)
whats on your other shoulder? - lol.in complete agreement with becky - spiritual but in a fashion i can except...even love to understand :)
Brian, Laurie! :), Charles, Claudia, Blaza, Becky and Arron....Thank you all so much for your comments!! And some new visitors and followers! Wahoo!! That is exciting to me! I appreciate all of your words, truly!