the very way i hated when i loved...nice, yes i have seen that...nice cadence brought on by your rhymes...quick with pop i like
loving the flow and intensity of this, jebbi. nicely done.
wow..intense emotions here..left me kinda breathless-- nice jebbi
Thanks Brian, Sheila and Claudia for the comments and reads! :)
adore this. clever word-play makes this a real powerhouse of a piece for me. great work Jebbi!
Thanks Christi :)