the ugly butt of a beautiful joke... now thats a line right there, oh yeah - this, for me, is a true beauty - a pearler of a peach :)
nice...you make some great word pairings...social intercourse...nice...the ugly butt of a beautiful joke...some nice flow through this as well...
Great metaphor, well presented and followed through--got me at line 1.
wonderful! you have a new follower here!
Have to agree, the ugly butt of a beautiful joke was an awesome line. Great verse!
I enjoyed it.
Love those delicate inter-twists of faith. Beautiful.
Thanks so much for the awesome feedback! :)
Jonnia...welcome and thanks for the follow!
Jebbi.. what a beautiful way of dragging love from mundane stumbles. I believe it all.. :)
The clicks made this poem for me, especially the final pair clipping "me" saving it for the last line all on its own.
This is so very sweet and tender. I love it!Cheers,Mark Butkus
Soft and the onomatopoeic elements make this poem come to life. Wonderful.Beth
Thanks very much! :)
Jebbi--Such a wonderful whimsical innocence to this piece... adore this line--good god, oh, so beautifulthis is beautifully penned and a real delight to read.
Thank you Christi!!
I like how you see beauty. Your words flow and "click" together well. :-)
Thanks Joanne :)