Publication Credits

BROKEN GLASS -http://www.brokenglasspoetry.webs.com - Published in Online Ezine's First Edition - Crossroad, Schooled, Lost and Crushed

TURBULENCE http://turbulencepoetry.blogspot.com/ - Published in Issue number 7 - Seamstress


Thursday, March 8, 2012

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just a little chance of touch
bent, static ache
only the sun came

free-bird surround sound
unchanged

she flew quietly,
beautifully away

and they slept

and had

no shame

12 comments:

  1. ha...love the end of this...they slept and had no shame...also the free-bird surround sound...double meaning ...the song...and the bird song...i like...

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  2. Lovely poem to the passion where we seem to find a peace never known before. Excellent images of the bird, and knowing no shame, perhaps a reference to Eden?

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  3. Jebbi, I love your way. free-bird surround sound...just perfect. Really enjoy the sharp simplicity of this poem.

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  4. Thank you Brian! :) Charles, perhaps :) Emma thanks so much! :)

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  5. In it's simplicity this says so much. Just lovely, Jebbi!

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  6. only the sun came...sweet poem.
    gardenlilie.

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  7. too rude for me... lol; you know i love it and why... because it's just so
    is all...as ever jebbi, you poke me in th ear with a feather :)

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  8. nice...yes...and why should they...smiles...beautifully penned jebbi..

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  9. Oh, gorgeous work. I love the understated sensuality.

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  10. Thanks all very much for you awesome replies :)

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  11. This is simple and understated, like a haiku. Very much reflective of the picture itself.

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