ha...love the end of this...they slept and had no shame...also the free-bird surround sound...double meaning ...the song...and the bird song...i like...
Lovely poem to the passion where we seem to find a peace never known before. Excellent images of the bird, and knowing no shame, perhaps a reference to Eden?
Jebbi, I love your way. free-bird surround sound...just perfect. Really enjoy the sharp simplicity of this poem.
Thank you Brian! :) Charles, perhaps :) Emma thanks so much! :)
In it's simplicity this says so much. Just lovely, Jebbi!
only the sun came...sweet poem.gardenlilie.
too rude for me... lol; you know i love it and why... because it's just sois all...as ever jebbi, you poke me in th ear with a feather :)
nice...yes...and why should they...smiles...beautifully penned jebbi..
Oh, gorgeous work. I love the understated sensuality.
Thanks all very much for you awesome replies :)
This is simple and understated, like a haiku. Very much reflective of the picture itself.
Thank you Semaphore :)