Publication Credits

BROKEN GLASS -http://www.brokenglasspoetry.webs.com - Published in Online Ezine's First Edition - Crossroad, Schooled, Lost and Crushed

TURBULENCE http://turbulencepoetry.blogspot.com/ - Published in Issue number 7 - Seamstress

Monday, December 12, 2011

[vik-tim]




























Slam train rails
skim sparks
silent fires ignite

Fostered unkind words
fathered edges
far, unfiltered into deep 

whispered < no >

harsh < hush > 

unfiltered rant within,
self-loathe sees sparks
settled light tenders flight

< stop >


Ah! Victim!

NO!  a  [vik-tim]  would remain,

No, 

I am; NO!  

YOU!
you reap what you know
and sow

there goes

your victim


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2 comments:

  1. Brian CarlinDecember 28, 2011 at 5:19 PM

    The words to the opening stanzas sit really well, like a painting, showing you have an eye for the look of a poem as well as its sense. Good work.

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  2. JebbiDecember 28, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    Thanks so much Brian for the read and such a nice comment :)

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