Baneful predator, beast beset
rips through her fast
without breath or regret
pupils dried, dilate, contrast
gone, her cherry colored past
hard nosed bitch, blue, she grins
bruised with spite
infected sins
dine on smoke
chokes back a tear
this wretched effigy
cracked the mirror
Wow! A hard edge, fast paced and emotive...gritty even..."baneful predator, beast beset" where'd you pull that line from? Awesome lines in this one..."infected sins" "dine on smoke" Awesome!
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